You should correct any mistakes and include anything that you missed out the first time (content and grammar).
When I marked your work, I underlined any parts where there problems and used the following marking codes:
Sp - Spelling
Gr - Grammar (tense)
P - Punctuation
ww - wrong word
? - I don´t understand
P - Punctuation
ww - wrong word
? - I don´t understand
Use the marking codes to help you figure out what the problem is.
Your redraft needs to be finished at home if you do not finish it in class. I will check these on Tuesday 4th October.
2. Extension: If you finish your redraft, please go to pages 6, 7 and 8 and look at the sports vocabulary. Make a quizlet (links above) to help you memorise them. Any good ones will be rewarded :)